The textual version is an artifact mapped from the hypertext node.
In looking at them together, I think the textual version is the lesser of the two versions.
I believe that this has to do with the fact I was engaging in a different type of writing that does not translate well into linear, textual discourse.

The secondary version becomes a textual exquisite corpse, pieced together from a variety of perspectives and ins and outs from the rhizome of the web.
The hypertextual ideas become more severed and separated from each other.

 

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